- Opens with middle-aged man crying into his hands sitting on the edge of a bath, floor is a wreck
- Flashback to the morning
- The man goes to town
- Has a serious of awful incidents with people, incidents that normally are not that serious but are amplified due to his depression
- Then someone casually says something nice to him
- Goes back to present time
- Gets into bath, recalls awful incidents through out the day
- Sinks beneath the surface
- In Bath, holding himself under, submerged in water
- The words of the nice comment reverberates through out his head
- Bursts through the surface of the water
- Cut.
Storyline obviously needs work but this is the initial basic outline of proceedings.
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