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Tuesday, May 26, 2015

Initial Plot Outline

After brief collaboration with the teacher, this is the basic outline of the film:
  1. Opens with middle-aged man crying into his hands sitting on the edge of a bath, floor is a wreck
  2. Flashback to the morning
  3. The man goes to town 
  4. Has a serious of awful incidents with people, incidents that normally are not that serious but are amplified due to his depression
  5. Then someone casually says something nice to him
  6. Goes back to present time
  7. Gets into bath, recalls awful incidents through out the day
  8. Sinks beneath the surface
  9. In Bath, holding himself under, submerged in water
  10. The words of the nice comment reverberates through out his head
  11. Bursts through the surface of the water
  12. Cut.
      Storyline obviously needs work but this is the initial basic outline of proceedings.

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